smackmybiscuits

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[–] smackmybiscuits 1 points 1 year ago

I'm just about to start Berg by Ann Quin, which seems to be about a man who stalks his dad and mistress through a seaside town. It looks really good from the first few pages.

[–] smackmybiscuits 1 points 1 year ago

Apologies in advance, because I'm not caffinated enough to be typing, but here are some of my unwarranted thoughts:

I think that writing is a skill you have to develop like a muscle. Writing something, even if it's just for yourself, is always going to be good workout.

I don't write as much non-fiction, so I don't really know how it works, but I find that when I am writing a first draft of something I don't always know what the focus of a piece will be. It's only when it's finished that I can see a theme and then rework it in.

In terms of writing for an audience, I think that can make writing too abstract. Someone once said that writing for one person is a lot easier than writing for a thousand people, because you cannot always please a thousand people in one go. Just focus on one person when you're writing and how the piece woukd make them feel (This person could be you or a friend, relavtive, loved one or enemy).

Also, if you are concerned that your current essays do not show any connecting theme, show them to a trusted friend or reader. They might be able to see themes in them that you've missed.

I hope this ramble helps and sorry it's not as coherent as I thought it would be.

[–] smackmybiscuits 1 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago)

I read The City & The City by China Mieville and some bits of Psychogeography by Will Self.

I would recommend the first one, especially if you like detective stories (and games like Disco Elysium).

I'm not sure about the second, it's a collection of columns and the throughline isn't as good as I'd hoped.