floridianreader

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[–] floridianreader@alien.top 0 points 11 months ago (3 children)

A book self-published by a family member. It's bad. It's really, really bad. I had problems in the first paragraph and thought it was me, I could push through bc it was sci-fi. NOPE. Not even the first page.

It changes tenses in the title, and multiple times in the first paragraph. It's like someone who had no grasp of the English language wrote it, but this family member is as American as they get.