Thank You very much for reading and feedback! Yes I think that many people felt like that at least once.
Adeptus
Thank You very much for this feedback! Yes I definitely has problems with presenting emotions credibly.
Thank You very much for reading! Were there some things You disliked?
Hi! I wrote about this problem in the game description on itch.io. "I heard that itch version sometimes doesn't work on the phones with Android. If it is the case, You can play downloadable version: https://www.mediafire.com/file/pj1ebcl1ke56cgs/Dominion_of_Darkness_1.993.html/file It works fine even when online version don't - I don't know why". Sorry for invonvenience but at this moment this is only 100% working solution I found.
I had this feeling with two first books too.
Thank You very much! I hope You will like it at least a bit.
I am reading "Dread Wyrm", third book in the Traitor Son Cycle by Miles Cameron. Plot and world are OK, but I have feeling they are written in clumsy style.
Hmm, I think that concept of text-based game is quite retro, so this is good place for searching people who would be interested in something like that.